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I like it :)

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It doesn't hurt to be nice! :)
:iconphoenixofthenet:
Er...that's wierd. I guess it's a good sort of humorous poem. You know, I once read a book when I was little called "Falling Up." There was another, called "Where the Sidewalk Ends." Both were excellent books of poetry for young children. This sort of poem, with is strange setting, unrealistic situation, and simple rhyme scheme would be perfect for just such a book. Have you considered writing poetry for children?

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<smoking-mirrors>I can pretend to have a penis for you, Joe.
<smoking-mirrors>Just like when I was a little girl.
<smoking-mirrors>Except I was a mermaid then.
<caveatLECTOR>with a penis?

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